I took a walk intent on what I was to see
Tall grass and wildflowers
Mud and toads, grasshoppers and birds
But my intent was not to be
Even though each flower had grown spirited and tall
The winds interfered with my view
Grasshoppers hopped under my clothing,
And the mud enticed me to fall
I sat in the middle of a pattern of lace
My intent shifted over wind swept fields
I connected within that moment, and
I watched the bees and butterflies race
20 replies on “Walking in a field of lace~poetry”
A beauty this one. Ahhh…nature is capable of
wonderful epiphanies. Your poem sounds like
a sweet irish verse.
Cynthia,
Thank you.
Gerardine
Geraldine,
your words evoked a very peaceful image.
I felt as though I was in that field.
A beautiful blog site also!
Best wishes,
Eileen
Elleen O Neill
Thank you! I am pleased about that you stopped by. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gerardine
beautiful words…
I am doing fine,
I write different kinds of poems, those are not necessity related to my actual mood…
Happy Weekend!
Jingle,
That is great! I need to stop over by your blog more often. Happy weekend to you, also.
Gerardine
So the fall was a good thing! Got to enjoy those butterflies and bees! Great poem.
Diane Truswell,
Yes, most things work out like that. It was a bit itchy. lol!
Gerardine
you write such glorious things Ger, the imagery makes you feel as if you were there, could almost smell the flowers in the feilds, exceptional, glad to have u back busy lady xxxx
William,
thank you for stopping by. I am behind in reading your poems. I printed them out so I have them with me. I will stop over and comment this weekend. I hope you are doing well!
Gerardine xxx
Glad that you linked to poets united…
😉
Jingle,
Have a great week, I need to head over there too.
Gerardine
Gerardine this is simply a wonderful post. I could smell the flowers and wish I was there walking through them. Of course everyone who knows me know that I love wild flowers and nature. Thank you for bringing back happy memories to me.
Viola,
To give you those memories just made my day brighter. I send you lots of love.
Gerardine
Beautiful blog, beautiful butterflies and bees
A picture of total bliss.
ninotaziz,
thank you.
Gerardine
gorgeous pic and marvellous poem. sometimes we let petty things obstruct the grander views.
trisha,
that is so true. Have a wonderful day!
Gerardine
Hi, it’s a lovely picture and poem.
Lawrenceez,
Thank you,
Gerardine