- Haiku Challenge day 13 grumble
Stuck in a tiny cell
Without food, water or shoes
Wonder what the rats think?
Hear the grumble of strife
Shuffling in corners and walls
Watch out the doors open!
Here is the link to the Haiku Challenge Blog:…http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/2011/02/haiku-challenge-28-days-28-haikus-day_13.html
10 replies on “Haiku Challenge, day 13 ~Grumble”
beautiful imaginations.
well penned Haikus.
🙂
Jingle,
Thank you. I hope your weekend was fun!
Gerardine
Wow, very vivid to all the senses!
honeyhaiku
Thank you!
Gerardine
Hopefully the doors open to freedom. Thank you for your take on this topic.
cloakedmonk
That is what I hope for as I look at this picture.
Thank you for commenting. Gave a great day!
Gerardine
I do not even know how I ended up here, but I thought this post was great. I do not know who you are but certainly you are going to a famous blogger if you aren’t already 😉 Cheers!
thank you
Gerardine
beautiful imagination Gerardine.. Loved your take..
Someone is Special
Someone Is Special
Thank you.
Gerardine