Life makes a sound
Rattles, Sings, Roars and Whistles
Can you hear your life?
Rush, rush, rush! Ease up
Life comes at you full speed,
Step off the tracks and rest
*
Walk the rail, kick the gravel
Dance forward, feel the vibration
Just don’t forget, home
*
This is the last day of The Haiku Challenge. I had fun! I hope you enjoyed reading my Haikus and you followed the links to other poets. Maybe you wrote a few yourself, If not, try it!
The snow is melting, sort of. Everything is covered in a very, slippery coating of ice, right now it’s glistening in the sunlight. Such dangerous beauty! I finally got a camera that works; now I need to set up the software and start snapping pictures. See you outside on our walking path..:-)
Here is the link to the last day of the Haiku Challenge Blog…http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/2011/02/haiku-challenge-28-days-28-haikus-day_8843.html
9 replies on “The last day, day 28 for the Haiku Challenge”
Love it, a lovely message to leave with! Cheers to all your work this month, you are a wonderful talent.
When life feels the craziest it is best to step off those tracks. I truly enjoyed this journey with you and all the other challengers.
bravo … this month has been a delight; appreciative the challenge introduced me to your work! Thank you, becca
this has been a marathon, and as always you mastered the challenge and in my view blasted it, beautiful set of haikus, and well done, and also thank you dear for the kind birthday message I had a wonderful day xxx
and you gave it a bang “don’t forget home” clear and concise, that home is necessary even when we need a break, a place to rest, care for…thank you 🙂
keep walking, your walking path is elegant.
Really nice imagery and photo.
given you the perfect poet award for week 39, visit me to claim…
welcome join poets rally week 39 ot poetry potluck week 25..
Cheers,
thanks for being my first poetic friend in blogging world.
you rock.
🙂
Happy Sunday..