As the Earth bleeds
and
Oil seeps from its core, smothering life
Our needs come before everything
Our needs move in circles where money rules
Our needs place us up above all else
Our needs cause the Earth to bleed
Our needs smothers and drowns
Every living thing in oil and blood
Our needs are not what we think
For
If
We
Took
A
Moment
To
Think
Outside
Of…
Our needs, would we notice
Our needs are killing the planet
Stop!
And ask yourself
What do you really want?
As the Earth bleeds
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~ Question: What’s wrong with using wind and solar energy? When will life take a front seat to profit? I found the picture I used here: http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=news+on+oils+spill+in+gulf+of+mexico++2010&go=&form=QBIR&qs=n&sk=#focal=d0016a8f167db3282e26c160de37391c&furl=http%3A%2F%2Fi.dailymail.co.uk%2Fi%2Fpix%2F2010%2F05%2F10%2Farticle-0-096DF4F9000005DC-336_634x577.jpg**
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27 replies on “Poem, As The Earth Bleeds!~Or, We Need To Notice The Profits On The Wind And Remove The Earths IV!~”
What a BEAUTIFUL , relevant post, Gerardine.
I was just reading about the oil spills again and how it is now such a threat to more if not all…
You did such a graceful and marvelous job.
love this so much! love you more.
Mine is here
Happy Sensational Wednesday!
hugs
shakira
shakira,
Thank you!
Too many people think if they don’t look straight at a problem it will go away. It never does it only gets worse.
Have a wonderful Wednesday!
Gerardine
Gerardine, are you not joining us for the Rally?
shakira,
Which Rally?Sorry brain went to sleep, I added my name to Jingles Blog. Thanks for reminding me.Gerardine
I agree with the lovely Shakira this is VERY relevant and needs to be said time and time again, u have outdone yourself this time dearest, you are a very good writer and we are very lucky to have you, BRAVO.. give my pal a biccy lol xxx
william,
Thank you! I love your comments.
Gerardine xx
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what a beautiful poem about the global issues we have..thanks for sharing! 😀 great poem!
oinky,
Thank You,
Gerardine
Straight at the source.
The earth is.
We are.
Your poem: Powerful message and attractive form.
Jess Killmenow,
Thank you ,
Gerardine
creative!
Ji,
Thank you
Gerardine
Excellent message and most apt at this time. I also like the visual aspect. Clever.
anthonynorth,
Thank you,
Gerardine
Great and crafty post. Very current I hope they solve the crisis soon. Adore your work Gerardine
shanellis,
I just wish I could do something more.
Gerardine
When will we learn it? After how many more deaths?
fantastic poem and priceless message.
trisha,
But will anyone listen? Thank you for commenting .
Gerardine
Very poignant, I love how you have placed your words, slowing the reader down.
Candida,
I wanted the poem read slower I am glad you spotted that. Thank you for your comments.
Gerardine
Wow!.. The poem is very powerful, even the layout does wonders to the impact, good job!
keerthana,
Thank you.
Gerardine
Wow! Amazing. I liked how you managed it in the globe picture.
Achyut Telang,
Thank you
Gerardine
I really like this poem. So apropos with all that’s going on. Beautifully done!
Michele Spector
Thank you
Gerardine